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Every day traffic seems to get worse on our roads. How can we reduce the number of cars on our roads today? What alternatives can we offer car drivers?
Model Answer:
The more people that there are in the world, the more cars there are on the road. People are richer too and often families have more than one car. It has been proved that building more roads does not work; it just encourages more traffic.
So, what can we do? People like their cars and the freedom and independence that cars give them. One possibility would be to raise car taxes and fuel taxes so that people do not want to spend the extra money. Taxes on new car sales as well could be increased in order to discourage people from buying. Perhaps a used car sales tax could be introduced too. In the same way motorways could have tolls charged for using them although this may just increase congestion on smaller roads as people try and avoid the motorways. The government that introduces such ideas will not be popular though and would probably lose power. Governments would therefore be unlikely to set up such new measures.
I think it would be better to try and change people?s attitudes and offer them alternatives. Educate them more about the pollution and waste that they are causing. Persuade them to car share, use public transport or even cycle if the distances are not too long. Countries such as Holland and Denmark are well known for how their citizens are passionate about green issues and how they use bicycles when they can.
Reducing traffic is a difficult task. I don?t think it is possible realistically to reduce car numbers but I do think that we can change people?s attitudes and get them to use different ways of travelling.
关于雅思图表作文写作的注意事项
Hints for Academic Writing Task 1
DONT copy any part of the question in your answer. This is not your own work and therefore will be disregarded by the examiner and deducted from the word count. You can use individual words but be careful of using long chunks of the question text.
Dont repeat yourself or the same ideas. This gives a bad impression and the examiner realises that it isnt adding to the content of your report.
If you are weak at English grammar, try to use short sentences. This allows you to control the grammar and the meaning of your writing much more easily and contributes to a better cohesion and coherence mark. Its much easier to make things clear in a foreign language if you keep your sentences short!
Think about the tenses of your verbs. If youre writing about something that happened in the past, your verbs will need to be in the past tenses. If youre describing the future, you will need to use the future tenses. If its a habitual action, youll need the present simple tense and so on. If you have time, a quick check of your verbs at the end of the exam can help you find errors. For describing graphs you will probably need past tenses whereas, for describing a process, you will probably need the present simple. Think about the verbs while practising and then it will become easier when you do the exam.
As I just said, if you have finished the exam with time to spare, DONT just sit there!! Check what you have done. If you have time after the check, check again. And so on
雅思图表作文模板「经典篇」
静态图表可以为所呈现的信息，只有不同数据之间的对比，无时间变化的图表。主要常见的静态图可以分为：柱状图，饼状图，表格以及对比式的地图题。不同于比如折线图的雅思小作文动态图，静态图的写作技巧有所不同。首先分类，其次按比例进行描写。
对于比例的描述中常用的词：
(大比例：Dominate/occupy the majority of/ stand at the largest of proportion of
which is…注意词性的'替换。)
模板句型：
rank/position second followed immediately/closely by C and D.
B is in the second place.
B is the second most/least popular…
2. 占据(占据多少百分比)
Be/consist/compose/take up…/comprise/constitute/make up/account for/occupies a majority of sth.
. Voluntary workers take up nearly half of the work force in house care sector (医护产业).
Hispanics (a speaking person living into the US. Especially one of Latin American)
综合句型：
be 倍数 as many/much as B(利用句型，雅思考试想要达到高分要求的话，要尽量在主语上下功夫，脑袋里首先想到的主语一定是大家都能想到的，再想想看是否可以用别的主语进行造句)
. Women working as/employed as child minder in the under-35 age group in 1995 were twice as many as in 1990.
Television was twice as popular as washing machine in , with close to 10% of household owning one TV set at home.
(sale volume of television销售量;新高/新低 new high/new low)
主体段落开头必备：
clearly, .../ obviously, .../ apparently, .../ evidently, ...
短语：
According to the table/data, .......
In accordance with the table/data, .....
That从句：
It can be seen from the + 图表+that ......
We can see from the + 图表+that ......
It appears from the data that ......
It indicates from the table that.......
As从句：
As we can see from the data/table, ......
As we can see from the data/ table, .......
As is reflected in the table, ......
The wealth gap between 1st world countries and 3rd world countries seems to be increasing. How can we reduce this gap? Do you think that developed countries have a duty to assist developing countries in every way?
Every day the rich countries in the world get richer and the poor countries get poorer. Can we reduce this gap? Of course we can. The question is whether the people in power want to do it?
Reducing the wealth gap can be achieved by cancelling third world debt, cancelling trade and farming subsidies so that third world countries can compete, getting rid of third world corruption and investing and building in third world countries using local people and skills and allowing them ownership of businesses. There are other things as well. Unfortunately there is no profit in business for first world countries to do these things. Some will do them but most will not. The ordinary man on the street wants things to be better for poorer countries and the politicians say that they will help but the politicians will in the end do what business tells them to do. Politicians also rightly feel they have a duty to protect their own countries and keeping economically dominant is part of this duty. Creating effective competition for their own country?s businesses is not part of what they are expected to do.
This then leads on to whether I believe that developed countries have a duty to help the developing countries. Yes, I do. As an individual I believe that we have a duty to assist the poorer countries with their development in all aspects. We can provide teachers and education and doctors on the small scale and on the larger scale the things that I have talked about in the previous paragraph. Can we do this? Yes. Will we do this? See the previous paragraph again.
In conclusion you can see that I believe that there is a split between what would happen in a perfect world and what actually happens. We have a duty to reduce the wealth gap between developed and developing countries and we can do it, but it is unlikely that this will happen quickly.
The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
柱状图显示的是1970-1990二十年间英国人每周在快餐上花费了多少钱;曲线图展示的是这二十年间快餐消费的趋势。
The bar chart shows how much money was spent on fast foods per week in the UK over a span of 20 years from 1970 to 1990 while the graph reveals the trend of fast food consumption over the same period of time.
从柱状图看，各收入阶层在汉堡和鱼煎薯条这两种快餐上的支出相对高于在皮萨上的消费;曲线图反映出汉堡与皮萨的消费呈现上升趋势，鱼煎薯条则呈现出波动趋势。
As we can see from the chart, the weekly expenses of people of different income levels on hamburgers and fish and chips were relatively higher than that on pizza. The graph indicates that while hamburger and pizza consumption both revealed a general trend of increase, fish and chips showed a trend of fluctuation.
首先，高收入阶层和中等收入阶层每周在汉堡上的'平均消费分别是每人42便士和33便士，比低收入阶层的14便士搞出了很多。在鱼煎薯条方面，高收入阶层的支出略低，是17便士，但中等及低收入阶层的支出都分别达到了25便士和18便士，相对于在皮萨方面支出的12便士和8便士高出了很多。值得一提的是高收入阶层在皮萨上的消费高于鱼煎薯条2便士，为20便士。
It is common nowadays for people to move to a new country as immigrants to seek new opportunities for work or to get married. For new immigrants, one of the major issues is to what extent they should accept the local culture as their own. While it is important for the newcomers to follow the local rules and convention in order to adapt to the new environment and start their new lives, I believe that it is beneficial to both the immigrants and their host countries if the new members bring in their own culture and lifestyle for the sake of cultural diversity.
To begin with, new immigrants would make more smooth transition to their new life if they understand how the society of their host countries works and behave accordingly. To consider a simple example, when an American moves to England, she will have to drive on the left side of the road following the English customs. Otherwise, she will immediately find herself either in a severe accident or in jail for breaking the traffic laws. By the same token, a Mexican woman who immigrates to America will have to try to develop her English proficiency in order to better communicate with the local people whose native language is English. Nonetheless, as I will argue later on, following the local convention in one's daily life is one thing, but accepting the local culture as one's own is quite another.
For the American who is now living in England, even though she has to obey all the English laws, she can still choose to retain her American identity and lifestyle. For example, she may cook American food at home and dine with her friends in American-style restaurants. In addition, she can still speak to her children with her American accent and teach her children American values. This is also true for the Mexican woman who moved to America.
In fact, it is now generally acknowledged that cultural diversity should be considered a strength for a nation as people from different backgrounds will have a chance to learn from one another. For example, the American immigrant who cook American food at home might also share with her English neighbors the American recipes and help bring the American cuisine to an English dinner table. The Mexican woman who takes English courses in the local community college may also tutor her American classmates who are learning Spanish or studying Mexican culture.
In conclusion, people who choose to immigrate to a different country may face great challenges and opportunities as they adapt to the new environment. It is true that they need to make the efforts to learn the new rules and culture of the host country. But they should also be encouraged to retain their own cultures and lifestyles as new members of a more diverse society.
Introduction
The bar chart compares the time spent by 10 to 15-year-olds in the UK on two activities, namely chatting online and playing computer games.
该柱状图比较了英国10至15岁青少年的两项活动，即在线聊天和玩电脑游戏。
Overview
By contrast, girls prefer chatting online. Close to 70% of 10 to 15-year-old girls engage in online conversation each day, compared to about 50% of this cohort who play computer games. Of the girls who do play on consoles, most of them play for less than an hour, whereas most girls who chat online do so for more than one hour, and nearly 10% chat for four hours or more.(188)
饼图：游客分析
The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999.
As a matter of fact, such practice can bring more benefits in various aspects, especially in economic growth. For one thing, as the newly-tapped energy can directly alleviate the energy shortage, which will to some extent guarantee a country’s industrialisation a promising prospect, both economic and technology development will be spurred, offering better prerequisites to resolving environment crisis by exploring new alternatives. In contrast, the lack of feasible approaches to energy scarcity will undoubtedly bring both economic growth and technology advancement to a standstill.// For another, the locals in remote areas can also be benefitted, as such a policy must provide them with more job opportunities, by which their life quality will be bettered.
反驳：(1)开发能源 → 满足能有需求 → 保证经济发展 → 有资金探索新能源替换，长远看，某种程度上弥补之前可能带来的环境破破坏;(2)偏远地区更多工作机会
alleviate vt. 缓解
spur vt. 刺激;促进
prerequisite n. 先决条件
bring sth. to a standstill静止(状态); 停顿，停滞
首先我们找到题目问的是：what extent do you agree or disagree.
大脑要开始思考了哈。。。
100% agree, 100% disagree, partly agree。
三个方向，分别需要三类不同的写作结构。暂时先不详细考虑，接着读.
题目的背景：很明显是第一句话，随着城市的科技不断发展，传统技能和生活方式也消失了。
题目的观点：尝试或努力保持它们存活下来，是没有任何意义的。
（它们指的就是传统技能和生活方式）
再读第三遍：
找到几个重要的关键词：country technology, traditional skill, ways of life, pointless, alive.
无论你能写出多高的雅思作文，这一步都是必不可少的。
1.年2月13日In some countries, there has been an increase number of parents who educated their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
年3月31日Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time on sports. Why is it? Is it a positive or negative development?
3.年5月16日 To improve the quality of education, people think that we should encourage our students to evaluate and criticize their teachers. Others believe that it will result in a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
4. 2015年10月8日In some countries, secondary school aims to provide a general education across a range of subjects. In others, children focus on a narrow range of subjects related to a particular career. Which do you think is appropriate in today's world?
月27日Many people do not feel safe either at home or they are out. What are the causes, and what can be done to make people feel safer?
月14日 A recent newspaper article reports that a 14-year-old boy who seriously destroyed his school got a punishment to clean streets instead of sent to the prison, do you think this is right, or the young criminals should be sent to the jail?
3.年8月8日Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later. Some people think that they are the best people to talk to school students about the danger of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
雅思图表作文的写作注意事项分享
As I just said, if you have finished the exam with time to spare, DONT just sit there!! Check what you have done. If you have time after the check, check again. And so on....
Dont be irrelevant. Although you can use your imagination to expand on your answer, if any part of your report is totally unrelated to the question and put in to just put up the word count, then the examiner will not take it into account and deduct it from the word count.
If you want to improve, theres no secret. Practice. Practice. Practice. You wont get better sitting and doing nothing. Even good English users need practice for the IELTS exam. It could make all the difference between your getting the band that you need, and getting half a band less than you need and having to wait 3 months to do the exam again.
该图表对比的是1930-1980五十年间五个国家囚禁犯人的数据情况。
总的来看，美国、加拿大、新西兰数据最为突出，而50年里，各国在这方面的数据都呈现了很大的波动性。
首先，英国的监禁数据一直处于上升中。从1930年的30,000例逐渐增至1980年的85,000例，其中1940-1970年间增长最快。
第二，澳大利亚和新西兰的状况有点相似，但没有新西兰起落幅度那么大。这里，我们看到1930年时，澳大利亚的数据是70,000例，而新西兰则高达近100,000例。接下来的1940年两国的数据都出现了很大的下降，特别是新西兰下降了接近45,000例。1950年，新西兰数据继续小幅度下降，澳大利亚则小幅上扬。之后的.1960年里两国数据都大幅上扬，分别达到70,000例和78,000例。1970年出现了很有趣的一面：英国、澳大利亚、新西兰三国的数据持平在79,000例，接下来的1980年我们看到的则是澳大利亚的大幅下跌与新西兰的继续增长。
第三，美国和加拿大起点非常高，1930年分别是100,000例和120,000例。1940年，美国大幅攀升至130,000例，而加拿大则出现了约10,000的下降。1950年，情况又发生戏剧性变化，美国降低了约20,000例，而加拿大则上升到大约115,000例。1960年，美国上升，加拿大下降，两国数据分别是118,000例和102,000例。1970年两国同时大幅下降，美国跌至95,000例，加拿大跌至83,000例。1980年美国的增长幅度大得惊人，迅猛攀升至138,000例，加拿大也上升至90,000例。
由此，我们看出，这五个国家的监禁情况在50年间确实发生了很多的变化。
比如我们来看上面例子里的第四句，范文只是说一个保持，另两个稍稍上升，并没有说具体从多少上升到了多少。纵观整个折线图，这个具体数值其实也并不重要，所以完全可以像范文这样写。这样写的好处当然就是涵盖的信息点更多，同时没有因为不重要的细节而使得句子很长。
范文只是一个示范，对于信息的归类当然可以有所不同，但是我们写的目标就是像范文一样，一个简洁的句子里包含很多信息点！觉得要做到这个就需要反复练习，练的多了，就能体会到该怎么安排信息。
月30日In some countries, the government has tried to reduce traffic. For instance, they imposed a congestion tax during rush hour. Do you think this development is positive or negative?
月23日Some people say government should give the health care the first priorities , some others believe there are more important priorities to spend the tax payers' money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
月29日 Some people regard the increasing business and cultural contact between countries as a positive development. Others, however, feel these leading to loss of national identities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
2.年8月13日International travel sometimes lead people have some prejudices rather than broad minds，why? How to improve the understanding of countries they visit?
月10日Many customs and the traditional ways of behavior are no longer relevant to the modern life and no worth keeping. Do you agree or disagree?
它又分成三种类型,即统计表(Table),原理图(Diagram),流程图(Flow Chart).前几年的阅读考试图表题以Table居多,而近一两年Diagram 和Flow Chart出现次数较多.
图表题虽然不是阅读的主流题型,但也有可能在你参加的考试中“冷不丁”冒出来.如果没有经过对该题型的研究学习和心理准备,则会由于不熟悉或不能正确理解图表的结构而导致失分.相对而言,Diagram题由于不存在对结构理解的问题,所以是属于简单的题型.而Table和Flow Chart则有可能被命题者设计的较为复杂.解题的关键在于对图表结构的理解和定位词的选择.
1.仔细阅读解题说明,明确以下几点：
题目对图表内容的简要说明
题目所给出的字数限制
题目中是否给出了阅读范围
2.要仔细阅读图表中出现的信息,包括图表的小标题,图表中的关键文字,图表中的说明及注释.因为这些都是定位答案信息的重要依据.对于Flow Chart和Table类型的题目,一定要读懂其结构形式,这一点对于提高答题的速度很关键.
4.对于Table题,应掌握利用行,列及单元格关键词的“两级定位”技巧.
5.见到结构较为复杂的图表不要慌乱,冷静分析后会发现,结构越复杂的图表其实定位关键词也越明确,通常都会比较容易在文中定位.
雅思阅读实用分配原则
1、“1+1+3”模式的解决对策
去年雅思考试的时候阅读的部分碰到的就是第二种模式，第二篇文章都很简单，只要把每一段的“3句”看一篇基本上所有的答案都找到了，因此我只花了20分钟不到就把前两篇文章做完了。然后再看第三篇文章……噩梦开始了……文章很长，我一开始照例还是先看了每一段的“3句”，再回头去看题目，发现题目问的内容跟我刚看过的内容完全没关系。再找关键词……没有专有名词，没有数字……总之一般可以当作关键词的，题目里面都没有!(这种情况在配对题里体现得尤为明显。)而这时候已经又用掉了我10分钟时间了!所幸还剩30分钟，时间还比较充裕，于是我使出了一招——通读全文!仗着自己阅读速度比较快，我老老实实地全篇文章从头到尾一字不漏地通读了一遍，于是，那些原本隐藏在犄角旮旯里的key information，也就给我一个一个找到了!既然所有问题的答案在哪里都找到了，接下来只要正确理解那些key information的意思，我想阅读要拿个9分真的并不难吧?
2、雅思阅读的难度分配原则
雅思阅读考试当中时间的分配很重要，一共60分钟时间做3篇文章，你怎么分配时间?平均每篇20分钟?别傻了，这样你第三篇文章肯定来不及!根据笔者长期的观察，可以把雅思阅读的文章按照难度从低到高排列分为1，2，3三个等级。难度的1级文章90%以上的题目答案都在每一段的“3句”(句，第二句，一句)范围之内，因此只要把文中每一段的“3句”读完就能找到绝大多数题目的答案，而且可以很快!难度为2级的文章则是70%的题目答案在每段的“3句”范围中，剩下30%的题目答案则必须借助定位关键词等技巧在文中其它部分寻找。难度的3级文章最“恐怖”，在这种类型的文章中你会发现光看每一段的“3句”根本找不到任何题目的答案，绝大多数题目的答案都隐藏在文中中及其不起眼的角角落落。定位关键词?对不起，你会发现题目当中你根本找不到任何关键词给你定位!也就是说，在3级难度的阅读文章里，你会发现基本上所有的阅读技巧都不管用了。
综上所述，在阅读考试中，不管任何情况都不应该把做三篇阅读文章的时间平均分配。
笔者建议大家可以按照以下方案来分配时间：
1+2+2模式=10分钟+25分钟+25分钟
1+1+3模式=10分钟+10分钟+40分钟
柱状图的基本特征就是，在适当的地方作比较。
大家别忘了，剑桥雅思官方对小作文的题目要求是：Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.（在有关联的数据之间作比较）
数据之间的比较，指的就是倍数、分数、相等这三种关系。所以，我们需要掌握各种比较关系的表达，小轩总结了三种最实用、最经典的句型：
比如分别用这三种句型来描述下面的图：
There is no doubt that traffic and pollution from vehicles have become huge problems, both in cities and on motorways everywhere. Solving these problems is likely to need more than a simple rise in the price of petrol.
While it is undeniable that private car use is one of the main causes of the increase in traffic and pollution, higher fuel costs are unlikely to limit the number of drivers for long. As this policy would also affect the cost of public transport, it would be very unpopular with everyone who needs to travel on the roads. But there are various other measures that could be implemented that would have a huge effect on these problems.
I think to tackle the problem of pollution, cleaner fuels need to be developed, The technology is already available to produce electric cars that would be both quieter and cleaner to use. Persuading manufacturers and travellers to adopt this new technology would be a more effective strategy for improving air quality, especially in cities.
However, traffic congestion will not be solved by changing the type of private vehicle people can use. To do this, we need to improve the choice of public transport services available to travellers. For example, if sufficient sky trains and underground train systems were built and effectively maintained in our major cities, then traffic on the roads would be dramatically reduced. Long-distance train and coach services should be made attractive and affordable alternatives to driving your own car for long journeys.
In conclusion, I think that long-term traffic and pollution reductions would depend on educating the public to use public transport more, and on governments using public money to construct and run efficient systems.
The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.
雅思小作文范文
The pie charts give information about the water used for residential, industrial and agricultural purposes in San Diego County, California, and the world as a whole.
It is noticeable that more water is consumed by homes than by industry or agriculture in the two American regions. By contrast, agriculture accounts for the vast majority of water used worldwide.
In San Diego County and California State, residential water consumption accounts for 60% and 39% of total water usage. By contrast, a mere 8% of the water used globally goes to homes. The opposite trend can be seen when we look at water consumption for agriculture. This accounts for a massive 69% of global water use, but only 17% and 28% of water usage in San Diego and California respectively.
Such dramatic differences are not seen when we compare the figures for industrial water use. The same proportion of water (23%) is used by industry in San Diego and worldwide, while the figure for California is 10% higher, at 33%.
(168 words, band 9)
先写一个大致的中文提纲，理顺一下写作思路：
下面我们就可以按照前面学过的五大句型和多点数据的连接方式写出英文段落了：
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文章篇幅限制，字数已超载，以上是免费发布的全部内容了，Part 4-7补充题型的部分目前仅供加入课程的同学获取。↓ ↓ ↓
（添加好友时请求信息填写：知乎雅思）
各位烤鸭们不要忘记了：小作文在写作评分中占的比例是1/3，而占比2/3的大作文，才是我们备考时关注的重点，大作文几乎决定了写作全卷的好坏！！
雅思写作分数占比2/3的「雅思写作大作文备考体系」↓ ↓ ↓
雅思写作已达的烤鸭，小轩也准备了「读新闻学雅思作文：高级写作句型全积累」的连载文章 ↓ ↓ ↓
震撼发布：「雅思口语Part 1,2,3各题型攻略全解析」↓ ↓ ↓
小轩的研发、整理的：「雅思写作和口语免费与收费资料汇总」↓ ↓ ↓
小轩在课上时常听到烤鸭们争吵柱状图究竟应该按照什么标准来分类，有的老师说应该按照国家分，有的范文又说应该按照行业来分。
其实，因为分类标准不一样，所以写出来的文章结构会不一样，但都是正确的写法！
如果细心观察这图，会发现存在一些倍数和相等的数据，比如，在日本从事服务业的人数是工业的两倍，在巴西从事农业和工业的人数相等，在印度从事农业的远比工业和农业的多，这些都是特征数据，应该在写作时有意突出。
根据这些特征，以三个国家为线索先写一个中文的提纲：
根据这个中文提纲，就可以很简单地写出全部主体段了：
题目：Some people believe that job satisfaction is more important than job security. Others believe that people cannot always enjoy their jobs and that a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is true that seeking for a decent job is not as easy as decades ago due to the economic recession and competitive job market. Although some may argue that a sense of satisfaction towards their jobs is crucial, personally, I believe that a permanent job is more meaningful.
On the one hand, a permanent job can guarantee to meet employee’s basic needs. This is because almost no one can escape from the reality. Everyday, we are facing with a variety of expenses, such as food, shelter, transport, bill and even education tuition for children. With a relatively stable job, people, especially those in middle aged can cover most expenses. In addition, those who stay in the same company or institute are more likely to get a promotion as they show the loyalty towards their company. However, those who change their jobs frequently may meet unintended outcomes. For example, they may find difficult to support themselves and raise their family members.
On the other hand, those advocates for pursuing a job they love might regard job satisfaction as the priority when finding an employment. They believe only working with friendly colleagues and employers and under a flexible working time schedule, can they fulfill their potential and accomplish all tasks well. However, this idea is unrealistic. For example, dozens of young graduateshave the bitter result because of their immature thought, that is unemployment.
In my opinion, there is no perfect job in the world. The only thing we can do is to find a suitable job rather than a perfect one. There is a 10,000 hours theory in psychology thatpeople who devotethemselves to jobs and spend more than 10,000 hours constantly can become experts in that field. This theory tells us a plain fact that no one can achieve a sense of job satisfaction without years of efforts and persistence.
In conclusion, people having a constant job are more likely to have a promising job career and wellbeing.
The chart gives information about UK immigration, emigration and net migration between 1999 and 2008. 这张图表提供了1999年至2008年间英国移民、移民和净移民的信息。
Both immigration and emigration rates rose over the period shown, but the figures for immigration were significantly higher. Net migration peaked in 2004 and 2007. 移民和移民率在这段时间内都有所上升，但移民人数明显更高。净移民在2004年和2007年达到顶峰。
In 1999, over 450,000 people came to live in the UK, while the number of people who emigrated stood at just under 300,000. The figure for net migration was around 160,000, and it remained at a similar level until 2003. From 1999 to 2004, the immigration rate rose by nearly 150,000 people, but there was a much smaller rise in emigration. Net migration peaked at almost 250,000 people in 2004. 1999年，超过45万人在英国生活，而移民的人数不到30万人。净移民人数约为16万人，直到2003年才达到类似水平。从1999年到2004年，移民率上升了近15万人，但移民人数却少了很多。2004年，净移民人数达到近25万人的峰值。
After 2004, the rate of immigration remained high, but the number of people emigrating fluctuated. Emigration fell suddenly in 2007, before peaking at about 420,000 people in 2008. As a result, the net migration figure rose to around 240,000 in 2007, but fell back to around 160,000 in 2008.(159)
2004年之后，移民率仍然很高，但移民的人数却在波动。2007年移民突然减少，2008年达到了大约420,000人的峰值。结果，2007年净移民人数上升到24万，但在2008年又回落到16万左右。(159)
以上就是雅思小作文范文之雅思图表作文范文，更多优质雅思小作文范文即将上线，尽请期待。
The line graph compares three companies in terms of their waste output between the years 2000 and 2015. 从2000年到2015年，这条线图将三家公司的废物产出进行了比较。
It is clear that there were significant changes in the amounts of waste produced by all three companies shown on the graph. While companies A and B saw waste output fall over the 15-year period, the amount of waste produced by company C increased considerably.
很明显，图表上显示的这三家公司生产的垃圾量发生了重大变化。虽然A公司和B公司在15年的时间里看到了废物的产量下降，但C公司生产的废物量却大幅增加。
In 2000, company A produced 12 tonnes of waste, while companies B and C produced around 8 tonnes and 4 tonnes of waste material respectively. Over the following 5 years, the waste output of companies B and C rose by around 2 tonnes, but the figure for company A fell by approximately 1 tonne. 2000年，A公司生产了12吨废物，而B公司和C公司分别生产了大约8吨和4吨废料。在接下来的5年里，公司B和C的废料产量增加了大约2吨，但是公司A的产量下降了大约1吨。
From 2005 to 2015, company A cut waste production by roughly 3 tonnes, and company B reduced its waste by around 7 tonnes. By contrast, company C saw an increase in waste production of approximately 4 tonnes over the same 10-year period. By 2015, company C’s waste output had risen to 10 tonnes, while the respective amounts of waste from companies A and B had dropped to 8 tonnes and only 3 tonnes.(192 words, band 9)
从2005年到2015年，公司将废物产量减少了大约3吨，公司B减少了大约7吨的垃圾。相比之下，C公司在同样的10年时间里，废物产量增加了大约4吨。到2015年，C公司的废物产量已升至10吨，而A和B公司的垃圾量已降至8吨，仅为3吨。
混合图：英国移民
The chart below shows long-term international migration in UK.
月7日 Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists, not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract local people.
2.月31日Some people think people working in creative arts should be financially supported by government. Others think they should find financial support from other resources. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
月16日When new towns are planned, it is important to build more public parks or sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
月2日 Multicultural societies, where people of different groups live together, can bring more benefits than drawbacks to a country. To what extent do you agree and disagree?
The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries.
雅思小作文范文：
The charts compare Korea, Sweden and the UK in terms of the methods used in each country to dispose of harmful waste.
It is clear that in both the UK and Sweden, the majority of dangerous waste products are buried underground. By contrast, most hazardous materials in the Republic of Korea are recycled.
Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that 82% of the UK’s dangerous waste is put into landfill sites. This disposal technique is used for 55% of the harmful waste in Sweden and only 22% of similar waste in Korea. The latter country recycles 69% of hazardous materials, which is far more than the other two nations.
While 25% of Sweden's dangerous waste is recycled, the UK does not recycle at all. Instead, it dumps waste at sea or treats it chemically. These two methods are not employed in Korea or Sweden, which favour incineration for 9% and 20% of dangerous waste respectively.(159)
雅思作文图表描述常用表达
一、在运动范畴中存在着如下的8种运动趋向：
1.保持平稳：
我们可以使用的套用结构有：stay stable/remain steady。
举例：表示人口数量保持平稳的时候可以写：the number of population stayed stable./the number of population remained steady。
2.上升/增加：
我们可以使用的套用结构有：rise/climb/increase/ascend/mount/aggrandize(增加)
举例：人口上升：the number of population increased/ascended/mounted等等。
3.下降/减少：
我们可以使用的套用结构有：fall/drop/decrease/descend/decline
举例：人口减少：the number of population decreased/declined。
4. 下降后保持平稳：
这个图形比较奇怪，大家可以跟着我划一下：线段前面是向下的，后面是平的，在表示这个平的时候我们就不可以使用remain steady了，我们要使用的结构是bottom out。
举例：人口下降后保持平稳：the number of population decreased and bottomed out。
5.上升后保持平稳：
这个图形和上面那个类似，不过前面部分是上升的，后面部分是平的。前面的上升我们就不用说了，但是在上升以后保持平稳，我们需要使用level off。
举例：人口上升后保持平稳：number of population mounted and leveled off。
6.复苏：
前面下降了以后，然后就上升了，这两条线段的连接点就叫复苏。英语中表达为recover
举例：人口下降后复苏：number of population decreased and recovered。
7.波动：
这个我就不划了，就像我们的心电图一样。英语中叫fluctuate。
举例：人口波动：number of population fluctuated
8.达到顶峰：
peak/reach its summit/reach its zenith
举例：人口到达了顶峰：number of population peaked/reached its summit/reached its zenith。
二、程度只有两种，缓慢和陡然。
缓慢的/轻微的：gradually/smoothly/steadily/slightly
陡然的/大幅度的：dramatically /sharply/considerably/appreciably/
举例：
1.人口大幅度攀升：number of population mounted dramatically。
2.人口轻微下降：number of population decreased slightly。
3.人口逐渐下降：number of population decreased gradually 。
三、介词的使用
好了，我们现在已经说了两个范畴了，这个两个范畴可以帮你搞定任何线段组的描述。紧接下来我们要讨论的是怎样将线段组与数据进行连接。非常简单，注意如下的介词使用。
(一)remain steady/stay stable/level off/bottom out/peak/reach its peak/reach its zenith 后面需要使用的是at。
1. 人口在500万上保持平稳：number of population remained steady at 5 million。
2. 人口在800万时到达了顶峰：number of population peaked at 8 million。
3. 下降后，人口在400万保持平稳：after decreasing, number of population bottomed out at 4 million。
4. 上升后，人口在700万保持平稳：after mounting, number of population leveled off at 7 million。
(二)上升/下降后面使用to(到)和by(了)
1. 人口下降到200万：number of population decreased to 2 million。
2. 人口下降了200万：number of population decreased by 2 million。
3. 人口上升到1000万：number of population increased to 10 million。
4. 人口上升了500万：number of population increased by 5 million。
(三)recover的后面大家需要使用的是from
人口在200万时开始复苏：number of population recovered from 2 million。
(四) fluctuate的后面大家需要连接between...and.。.
人口在2和100亿之间波动：number of population fluctuated between 2 and 10 billion. (那俩人是ADAM和EVE)
雅思写作素材：working for the same company?
Some people prefer to stay in the same job for the same company, but others prefer to change jobs frequently. You should use specific reasons to compare the advantages and disadvantages of both sides.
Advantage of staying in the same job for the same company
Practice makes perfect. After working at a certain position long enough, a person will become very familiar with the work procedures and will be much more experienced, skillful and efficient than new comers in dealing with various tasks at this position.
Loyal employees are more likely to be promoted. If a person stays in a company longer than others, it usually means this person has made more contributions and is more loyal to the company and thus will have better chance of being promoted.
Staying in the same job increases a person’s self-value. If someone keeps on learning the latest knowledge and skills at a certain position in a certain field, this person will eventually become an expert or a professional or at least a highly skillful worker in this field, earning much more than other fresh-hands.
Disadvantage of staying in the same job for the same company = advantage of changing jobs
Some companies are not worth a person’s whole career life. There are some companies which lag far behind their competitors in a certain industry. They offer much less reward for their employees and they do not have a fair promotion system or a reasonable welfare system. Some can barely survive in today’s competitive society. Therefore both in terms of remuneration as well as career prospect, working long for them is not wise.
It is not easy to find an ideal job the first time you look for it, especially for fresh university graduates. Sometimes it is only by trying several jobs can a person eventually know what he or she likes doing most or can do best. Sticking to the wrong type of work makes it impossible for a person to enjoy working.
Some work is so boring that if someone keeps doing it for too long, he or she will feel dull and will become less interested and careful in doing that work.
雅思议论文写作素材：building theaters
Some people think that government shouldn’t put money on building theaters and sports stadiums. It should spend more money on medical care and education. Agree or disagree?
Disagree
are places where different forms of arts including films, concert, dramas and operas etc., are shown or performed. Many of them are educational and can teach people about the history and culture of their own countries and of other foreign countries. They can also teach people about love and hatred as in opera Romeo and Juliet; good and evil as in the movie “Schindler’s list”.
from work, people should have some entertainment to relax and enjoy their spare time. If there are no movie theaters, people will have no place to go for watching movies and people’s lives will become less interesting/dull indeed.
3. Sports stadiums are places where sports competitions are held which can increase people’s awareness of the importance of a healthy body. Then people will attach more importance to physical exercises which is the best way to prevent disease.
stadiums can also educate people about fair competition as well the spirit of cooperation. It also encourages people to try to challenge one’s own limit in order to achieve better accomplishment.
theaters and sports stadiums are great works of architecture and can represent a country’s or a city’s wealth and level of civilization. The Grand Theatre in Shanghai becomes a symbol of Shanghai. Sydney Opera House is a landmark in Sydney.
are an ideal venue for cultural communication and sports stadiums are good places for strengthening good relationship among nations.
雅思写作经典5段式作文参考(教育类)
5段式例文(一边倒)
People attend college or university for many different reasons. Why do you think people attend college or university?
People attend colleges or universities for a lot of different reasons. I believe that the three most common reasons are to prepare for a career, to have new experiences, and to increase their knowledge of themselves and the world around them.(41words)
Career preparation is becoming more and more important to young people. For many, this is the primary reason to go to college. They know that the job market is competitive. At college, they can learn new skill for careers with a lot of opportunities. This means careers, such as information technology, are expected to need a large workforce in the coming years.(62 words)
Also, students go to colleges and universities to have new experiences. This often means having the opportunity to meet people different from those in their hometowns. For most students, going to college is the first time they have been away form home by themselves. In addition, this is the first time they have had to make decisions on their own. Making these decisions increases their knowledge of themselves.(68 words)
Besides looking for self-knowledge, people also attend a university or college to expand their knowledge in subjects they find interesting. For many, this will be their last chance for a long time to learn about something that does not relate to their career.(43 words)
I would recommend that people not be so focused on a career. Instead, they should go to college to have new experiences and learn about themselves and the world they live in. This may make them better prepared for their future.(41 words)
The pie chart compares figures for visitors to four categories of tourist attraction and to five different theme parks in Britain in 1999.
It is clear that theme parks and museums / galleries were the two most popular types of tourist attraction in that year. Blackpool Pleasure Beach received by far the highest proportion of visitors in the theme park sector.
Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that 38% of the surveyed visitors went to a theme park, and 37% of them went to a museum or gallery. By contrast, historic houses and monuments were visited by only 16% of the sample, while wildlife parks and zoos were the least popular of the four types of tourist attraction, with only 9% of visitors.
In the theme park sector, almost half of the people surveyed (47%) had been to Blackpool Pleasure Beach. Alton Towers was the second most popular amusement park, with 17% of the sample, followed by Pleasureland in Southport, with 16%. Finally, Chessington World of Adventures and Legoland Windsor had each welcomed 10% of the surveyed visitors.
(181 words, band 9)
雅思小作文考官范文基本套路
段一：话题重述
段二：概括话题数据的主要特征或规律
段三：详述特征规律一
段四：详述特征规律二
注意：simon考官主张雅思小作文无须总结!大家可留心这一点。当然小作文是否需要写总结段，无定论。
a类雅思小作文9分范文分享 流程图之房屋特殊设计
The diagrams below show how houses can be protected in areas which are prone to flooding.
该流程图通过简洁而巧妙的设计，房屋如何免于洪水侵袭。请作答。
雅思线性图表作文模板「最新」
雅思小作文模板--线状图
1.先(上升/下降)后(下降/上升)，之后便平稳
According to the data ， the years from …to…saw/winess a rise/climb/drop in the number/rate/percentage/proportion of 对象 from数据to数据，which was followed by a rapid decrease/reduce/increase over the ** years.
2.对峰值和低谷的.描述
Also it can be noticed that in ** year ，the number/percentage … reached the buttom . However/on the contrary，**year saw the peak during this period.
……时间点 ，when the number/percentage reached(amounted to)to a peak of… / a high point at …
3.趋势相同描述
The proportion/number of 对象 in the xx and xx are similar and follow the same ** the figures were xx% and xx% respectively，rising to xx% and xx% respectively in **，after dipping to xx% and xx% respectively in **.(总体的趋势介绍)Thereafter，分开介绍即可
4.对未来的表述以及转换词
…is projected to…… as to
…is expected to…… as for
…is forcasted to …… …is estimated to…
5. 对波动的描述
as can be seen from the graph，the two curves show the flutuation of…
如图所示，两条曲线描述了…的波动情况。
……fluctuated dramatically between xx% and xx% during …period .
此外，在描述过程中还有很多的conjunctional words/sentences，最常用的固定搭配如下：
并列： as well as(句首/中)， also， as well(句尾)， either， neither， too， moreover， furthermore， in addition， additionally， besides， what’s more， apart from …
举例： for example， for instance， to illustrate， as an illustration， in particular， particularly， especially
事实： as a matter of fact， in fact， actually， as long as， so long as …
雷同/近似：similarly， likewise(句首/尾)， at the same time， equally …
转折： however， whereas， nevertheless， nonetheless， though， although， even though， while， yet， on the contrary， contrarily， in contrast， conversely， on the other hand， unlikely， instead (of)， in spite of， despite of …
The pie charts compare visitors’ responses to a survey about customer service at the Parkway Hotel in 2005 and in 2010.
It is clear that overall customer satisfaction increased considerably from 2005 to 2010. While most hotel guests rated customer service as satisfactory or poor in 2005, a clear majority described the hotel’s service as good or excellent in 2010.
Looking at the positive responses first, in 2005 only 5% of the hotel’s visitors rated its customer service as excellent, but this figure rose to 28% in 2010. Furthermore, while only 14% of guests described customer service in the hotel as good in 2005, almost three times as many people gave this rating five years later.
With regard to negative feedback, the proportion of guests who considered the hotel’s customer service to be poor fell from 21% in 2005 to only 12% in 2010. Similarly, the proportion of people who thought customer service was very poor dropped from 15% to only 4% over the 5-year period. Finally, a fall in the number of ‘satisfactory’ ratings in 2010 reflects the fact that more people gave positive responses to the survey in that year.(193 words, band 9)
a类雅思小作文9分范文分享 饼图题型之游客偏好分析
The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year .
该饼图展示游客参观英国4类旅游景点偏好的调查结果分析。请作答。
图表雅思作文要如何切入
图表雅思作文要如何切入?以下从几方面分析：
1、好的支持句肯定包含了恰当的衔接手段。衔接手段能够是衔接词，同时还能够是灵活而准确的指代。想要充分发挥支持的功能，支持句一定要紧扣主题句，提供准确的事实和数据，并且在语气上和主题句相匹配。尽管母语的使用过程里衔接手段是自然流露的，如此同样是雅思写作9分有关连贯及衔接的评分标准，但是鉴于6分到8分评分细则里针对衔接手段的强调不但只是在质量上有表现，同时在数量上也是有表现的，因此在训练小作文的过程中，有意地增加衔接手段也不是不好，即使是有时也许会不自然，但这样总比由于因为衔接手段不足而在这一项跌至5分更好。
2、数据直接反映出来的事实算得上是描写的要点，因此是支持句的关键信息。雅思小作文数据类图表写作的误区也只是满足在又或是说专注于对数据本身的描写，而把这一类文章基本的功能忽略了以此帮助读者理解图表。比如在描写某一个体现持续上升的数据时，若只是表达为某某数字从几几年的多少持续上升到了几几年的多少，又或是这条线呈上升的趋势或者这个比例是持续变大的，针对读者来理解图表基本上帮助不大，所以意义不大。
3、不难发现，其中包含了衔接手段、事实陈述与数字证据的支持句不可避免地变成了复杂句或者复合句，而在其中又包含了各种从句、并列句和非谓语动词，和概括句构成语法现象丰富的段落，如此针对评分标准里的任务回应程度
、连贯流畅性和语法的多样性全部属于直接的应对方式，并且还给词汇的变化尽量的创造了机会，或者说留出了空间。
雅思写作范文：生活压力变大的原因
Task：It is said that people’s life now is becoming more and more stressful. What are the causes and how to solve it?
思路解析：
1. 科技更新太快，这意味着人们不得不很努力地不停学习新的知识和技能。此外，激烈的就业竞争也让人们每天都处在紧张状态中。
2. 需要背负很多家庭责任，如照顾父母，照顾小孩。而生活成本却在不断增加，这让人们感受到经济上的压力。
3. 如何释放压力：多运动，运动能让人摆脱抑郁和沮丧，恢复精神上的放松。多跟人交流，这能获得来自他人的安慰，建议，和关爱，让人们看淡困难和焦虑。
参考范文：
The acceleration of industrialization and the prosperity of economy benefit our society a great deal. But with the speeding up of economic development, people are facing more and more pressure from various aspects of their life. This essay will explore the causes for the heavy pressure and put forward some feasible solutions.
One of the major causes is that people’s living rhythm has been promoted immensely with the upgrading of new-knowledge and hi-tech. To keep abreast with the society, people have to work intensively on the one hand and improve their knowledge on the other. The economic globalization strengthened international cooperation and expand people’s scope of activity. The fierce social competition deprives people of their spare time and makes their life more stressful.
Another factor comes from the pressure of people’s family. People in the current society have to shoulder the responsibility of family maintenance. On the one hand, people have to care for their parents, creating for them a happy and comfortable life. On the other hand, they have to give their children good education. To earn more money, people have to work very hard to finance their family.
If people live in heavy pressure, they will have problems both physically and psychologically. To relieve the pressure, I think the following suggestions are feasible and practical. Firstly, people are suggested to go in for some sports games in their spare time or at the weekend. Sports can build up people’s physique and make them vigorous. Secondly, people should communicate with others frequently and confess their trouble and difficulty to others, which is a very magic way to release one’s pressure. Finally, people have to find a balance between money and health. Otherwise, one’s health will be overdrawn and spoiled by money earning.
In brief, good life should not be obtained at the price of the deterioration of one’s health. People should improve their living pattern and lead a life of high quality.
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雅思写作范文：长期离家工作的好坏
Task:Today some person have to work away from his family, what are the advantages and disadvantages?
离家工作的好处1：培养了独立性。举例，这些人不得不依赖和挖掘自己的潜力和能力来应付一切生活中的挑战和困难。
离家工作的好处2：培养了社交能力。举例，他们要面临一个完全陌生的社会，和不同肤色，生活习惯和宗教的人群打交道，这培养了跨文化理解力。
离家工作的坏处1：家庭关系会崩塌。这些离开的人无力照顾自己的亲人和孩子，让他们感觉到被抛弃。
离家工作的坏处2：精神压力过大。长时间离家的人总是饱受思乡病，孤独和焦虑的折磨。
Nowadays, working in a new place or a foreign country distant from homes has been a heated trend in debate. In my view, this change simultaneously brings benefits and risks to these people leaving home, and my reasons would be explored as below.
The main relevant benefits are the improvement of independence and interpersonal skills. Firstly, being away from the comfortable and safe zone built up by parents and friends in homeland, people in a strange environment, especially the youngsters, have to take responsibility for daily affairs, tasks, behaviors, health care and schedules. These efforts can improve their self-care skills and decision-making ability. Moreover, living in a different cultural circumstance, frequently inevitable interactions with local peers and residents who have different skin colors, social manners, lifestyles and religions serve as a catalyst for increased maturity. In other words, after encountering with cultural diversity, these outcomers would become more independent, flexible, patient and adaptable, and acquire proficient social skills as well. Lastly, for people who live and work abroad, they can stay a foreign language immersion for a long term, thus helping them to master how to speak a second language natively.
However, the demerits associated with this kind of emigration should never be ignored. For one thing, as many people, especially young adults, leave hometowns for far-away places, they leave family behind. As a result, extended family systems begin to disintegrate. The result is often a lack of childcare and eldercare for family members. When a younger person leaves, marriage prospects for young adults who decide to stay sill decline.
For another, the second demerit is about a challenge on the spiritual level. Being isolated from family and motherland, an immigrator tends to be troubled in the mental stress. Specifically, the homesick, loneliness, frustration caused by cultural conflicts, and fear about the future always surround these helpless people, and give them psychological suffering all the time.
In conclusion, it is very hard to decide that advantages of this issue outweigh the disadvantages, or the reverse is true. Although such experience is beneficial for the form of independent and social abilities, as well as mature mind, the absence from home is detrimental to the people and their families.
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雅思写作范文：人们是否变的更独立
Task：Some people think that in the modern society individuals are becoming more dependent on each other，while others say that individuals are becoming more independent of each other. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The above chart provides a series of impressive data regarding how college students using their smart phones To be concrete, the percentage of studying occupies 58 percent, ranking the first one in the graph, followed by referring to materials whose proportion reaches 28 percent, with having fun and other purposes accounting for 12 percent, and 2 percent respectively.
There is no denying in saying that in recent decades, the number of college students using their smart phone to study has been steadily and continuously increasing due to the fact that the advancement of modern society’s technology. Besides, it is not hard to understand that smart phone has become a necessary part in college student’s daily life, thus attracting an increasing number of students to enjoy themselves by their phone. Furthermore, with people’s living styles changing, students prefer to develop their social life on internet and find more useful information to satisfy their academic and life’s needs.
So what will be the possible tendency of the phenomenon reflected by the chart in the future? From my perspective, this established tendency is positive and acceptable. As a result, it is unnecessary for the public to regard it with apprehension.
The bar chart compares the cost of an average house in five major cities over a period of 13 years from _.
We can see that house prices fell overall between 1990 and 1995, but most of the cities saw rising prices between and . London experienced by far the greatest changes in house prices over the 13-year period.
Over the 5 years after _, the cost of average homes in Tokyo and London dropped by around 7%, while New York house prices went down by 5%. By contrast, prices rose by approximately 2% in both Madrid and Frankfurt.
Between 1996 and 2002, London house prices jumped to around 12% above the _ average. Homebuyers in New York also had to pay significantly more, with prices rising to 5% above the _ average, but homes in Tokyo remained cheaper than they were in _. The cost of an average home in Madrid rose by a further 2%, while prices in Frankfurt remained stable.
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a类雅思小作文9分范文分享 饼图题型之酒店服务问卷
The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years and .
该饼图展示在和Parkway 酒店针对客人对酒店服务质量的评价所做的调查问卷的2次结果。请作答。
In my opinion, men and women should have the same educational opportunities. However, I do not agree with the idea of accepting equal proportions of each gender in every university subject.
Having the same number of men and women on all degree courses is simply unrealistic. Student numbers on any course depend on the applications that the institution receives. If a university decided to fill courses with equal numbers of males and females, it would need enough applicants of each gender. In reality, many courses are more popular with one gender than the other, and it would not be practical to aim for equal proportions. For example, nursing courses tend to attract more female applicants, and it would be difficult to fill these courses if fifty per cent of the places needed to go to males.
Apart from the practical concerns expressed above, I also believe that it would be unfair to base admission to university courses on gender. Universities should continue to select the best candidates for each course according to their qualifications. In this way, both men and women have the same opportunities, and applicants know that they will be successful if they work hard to achieve good grades at school. If a female student is the best candidate for a place on a course, it is surely wrong to reject her in favour of a male student with lower grades or fewer qualifications.
In conclusion, the selection of university students should be based on merit, and it would be both impractical and unfair to change to a selection procedure based on gender.
接下来用30分钟完整时间仔细阅读以下内容，边读边做笔记，你会感觉相见恨晚的，一股股写作思绪的清流在脑海里不断涌动，认真学习后，相信你的感受会是：
It is said that countries are becoming similar to each other because of the global spread of the same products, which are now available for purchase almost anywhere. I strongly believe that this modern development is largely detrimental to culture and traditions worldwide.
A country’s history, language and ethos are all inextricably bound up in its manufactured artefacts. If the relentless advance of international brands into every corner of the world continues, these bland packages might one day completely oust the traditional objects of a nation, which would be a loss of richness and diversity in the world, as well as the sad disappearance of the manifestations of a place’s character. What would a Japanese tea ceremony be without its specially crafted teapot, or a Fijian kava ritual without its bowl made from a certain type of tree bark?
Let us not forget either that traditional products, whether these be medicines, cosmetics, toy, clothes, utensils or food, provide employment for local people. The spread of multinational products can often bring in its wake a loss of jobs, as people urn to buying the new brand, perhaps thinking it more glamorous than the one they are used to. This eventually puts old-school craftspeople out of work.
Finally, tourism numbers may also be affected, as travelers become disillusioned with finding every place just the same as the one they visited previously. To see the same products in shops the world over is boring, and does not impel visitors to open their wallets in the same way that trinkets or souvenirs unique to the particular area too.
Some may argue that all people are entitled to have access to the same products, but I say that local objects suit local conditions best, and that faceless uniformity worldwide is an unwelcome and dreary prospect.
Heres my full answer:The line graphs show the average monthly amount that parents in Britain spent on their children’s sporting activities and the number of British children who took part in three different sports from 2008 to is clear that parents spent more money each year on their children’s participation in sports over the six-year period. In terms of the number of children taking part, football was significantly more popular than athletics and 2008, British parents spent an average of around ￡20 per month on their children’s sporting activities. Parents’ spending on children’s sports increased gradually over the following six years, and by 2014 the average monthly amount had risen to just over ￡ at participation numbers, in 2008 approximately 8 million British children played football, while only 2 million children were enrolled in swimming clubs and less than 1 million practised athletics. The figures for football participation remained relatively stable over the following 6 years. By contrast, participation in swimming almost doubled, to nearly 4 million children, and there was a near fivefold increase in the number of children doing athletics.
剑桥雅思6test1大作文范文，剑桥雅思6test1大作文task2高分范文+ 真题答案实感。考试的时候一直是考官给我的，因为我觉得我应该是最棒的。但我自认为我是个非常棒的中国人，我自认为是非常有发挥的一个部分，我的大部分分数也就是。首先，我要说的是，我想说，这是一个雅思写作考试。这里我想说一下，如果想得到8分以上，一定要有好的结构。首先，我们来说说雅思写作。雅思写作考试分为两个部分：一部分是图表分析，一部分是图表分析。我们在写作文的时候，一定要注意图片分析。这也是我们在备考的时候一定要注意的。首先，要明白雅思写作评分的标准：图表的准确性是非常重要的。所以我们应该在考试时，把图表分别描述一下。
题目：Nowadays many students have the opportunity to study for part or all of their courses in foreign countries. While studying abroad brings many benefits to individual students, it also has a number of disadvantages. Do you agree or disagree?
In recent years there has been a vast increase in the number of students choosing to study abroad. This is partly because people are more affluent and party due to the variety of grants and scholarships which are available for overseas students nowadays. Although foreign study is not something which every student would choose, it is an attractive option for many people.
Studying overseas has a number of advantages. Firstly, it may give students access to knowledge and facilities such as laboratories and libraries which are not available in their home country. Furthermore, by looking abroad students may find a wider range of courses than those offered in their country’s universities, and therefore one which fits more closely to their particular requirements.
On the other hand, studying abroad has a number of drawbacks. These may be divided into personal and professional. Firstly, students have to leave their family and friends for a long period. Furthermore, studying abroad is almost always more expensive than studying at one’s local university. Finally, students often have to study in a foreign language, which may limit their performance and mean they do not attain their true level.
In my opinion, however, the disadvantages of studying abroad are usually temporary in nature. Students who study abroad generally become proficient in the language quite soon and they are only away from their family and friends for a year or two. Furthermore, many of the benefits last students all their lives and make them highly desirable to prospective employers.
The picture illustrates the process of producing electricity in a home using solar panels.
It is clear that there are five distinct stages in this process, beginning with the capture of energy from sunlight. The final two steps show how domestic electricity is connected to the external power supply.
At the first stage in the process, solar panels on the roof of a normal house take energy from the sun and convert it into DC current. Next, this current is passed to an inverter, which changes it to AC current and regulates the supply of electricity. At stage three, electricity is supplied to the home from an electrical panel.
At the fourth step shown on the diagram, a utility meter in the home is responsible for sending any extra electric power outside the house into the grid. Finally, if the solar panels do not provide enough energy for the household, electricity will flow from the utility grid into the home through the meter.(163)
月12日Some people think that it is more important to plant more trees in open area which in towns and cities than build more housing. To what extend do agree or disagree?
月21日The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?
3.年9月15日More and more people buy and use their own car. Do you think the advantages of this trend for individuals overweigh the disadvantages for environment?
当然，大家要记住，刷题的目的不是为了大家背诵文章，而是通过常用的真题进行话题词汇的累积和观点方面的头脑风暴。毕竟考试的时候你不能把背诵的内容直接写进去，但是你留在脑海里的话题单词和观点，确实实实在在给你增加分数的砝码，最后希望各位考生多刷题，多思考，勤动笔，少背诵
最好的雅思写作开头段写法 必出自这5类
雅思写作开头段的构成
那我们研究开头段，第一个问题就是开头段是由什么组成的。开头段可以说是对于题目的一个最直接的回应，因此，一个开头段的组成基本是和题目的构成紧密相关的。而雅思大作文的题目构成主要分成两类，一类是和观点有关的题目，比方说“to what extent do you agree or disagree?”或者是“discuss both views and give your own opinion.” 这类题目的构成往往为“背景+题目观点+题目问题”。另一类是和事实有关的题目，比方说“do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?”或者是“what are the reasons and how to solve these issues?” 而这一类的题目中就只有“背景事实+题目问题”。
所以， 我们的较为标准的开头段通常便是“背景引入+题目观点复述+己方观点表达”或是，“背景引入+己方问题回应”。
因此我们在本篇先说一说开头段中的背景引入的方式。这个部分我认为应该是整个开头段从语言角度讲最重要的部分，最需要同学们的注意。
一方面因为，学生往往会用较为随便或千篇 一律的描述一笔带过，比方是“Nowadays, with the development of...”这样的老套话术，会给考官模板的感觉，也让考官对文章一开始就失去兴趣。另一个需要重视这一部分的重要原因是，这部分灵活度很强，也就是能更好的展现自己的英语实力。
所以，比起简单的同意替换，我们可以把背景引入分为五大类：
雅思写作开头段写法1 摆事实
也就是通过对题目主题的理解，写一句对事实的描述，从而引出题目的话题或是问题。
例：1. Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weakness. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender?(Collins Unit1)
There have always been differences in the types of work men and women have done...
2. Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?(Collins Unit2)
The increasing availability of convenience foods has been a significant feature of modern life in many developed countries...
3. In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? (C4T4)
Poor student behaviour seems to be an increasingly widespread problem and I think that modern lifestyles are probably responsible for this.
4. In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. (C5T2)
It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high school.
雅思写作开头段写法2 给原因
也就是根据题目中的观点或是题目中的事实去向前推出一层原因，从而让开头更有逻辑。
例：1. As language such as English, Spanish and mandarin become more widely spoken, there is a fear that many minority languages may die out. Some countries have taken steps to protect minority languages. What is your view of this practice? (Collins Unit5)
As the world becomes more integrated, the need for common means of communication is becoming more pressing.
2. Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. (C6T2)
As a result of constant media attention, sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities, and those at the top are paid huge salaries.
雅思写作开头段写法3 给结果
通过对于结果的描述，向上推出题目论证的内容。这个方法思路较绕，但是用恰当也算是另辟蹊径。
例：1. In the past, people spent their entire lives doing one job. But nowadays they change their job frequently. Please give your reasons and suggestions.
Though the experience of moving from one job to another can sometimes be distressing or even traumatic, thousands of employees move from one job to another in rapid succession every year.
2. Some people think that machine translation is highly developed in today`s society. Therefore it is not necessary for children to learn a foreign language. What`s your opinion.
It will be good news for school children when they are told that foreign language is no longer a required subject because translation can all be down by machines. ……
雅思写作开头段写法4 时间对比
这样的开头做法通常是将古今进行对比，从而引出题目的争论，或是主题。
例：1. Longer life spans and improvements in the health of older people suggest that people over the age of sixty-five can continue to live full and active lives. In what ways can social benefit from the contribution that older people can make?(Collins Unit9)
People today can expect to live a longer and healthier life than people in the past. …….(现在的人与过去相比预期活得更长，更健康。)
2. Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?(Collins Unit10)
In the past, news about famous people may have been confined to gossip columns in newspapers; these days it is not uncommon for celebrities to feature as front page news.
3. Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? (C9T1)
Traditionally, children have begun studying foreign languages at secondary school, but introducing them earlier is recommended by some educationalists.
雅思写作开头段写法5 地点对比
例：Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. (C8GB)
Some countries have single-sex education models, while in others both single sex and mixed schools co-exist and it is up to the parents or the children to decide which model is preferable.(有些国家通行同性别教育模式;而有些国家实行同性别教育和混合教育，父母或者孩子自己可以决定哪种模式更适合。)
The diagrams compare two different methods of defence for homes which are at risk of being flooded.
The key difference between the diagrams is that they show flood protection with and without a stopbank. In either case, the at-risk home is raised on stilts above ground level.
The first diagram shows how a stopbank acts as a flood barrier to stop river water from flooding homes. The stopbank is a small mound of land next to the river that is higher than the 100-year flood level, and prevents the river from bursting its banks. Nearby houses can be built on stilts to prevent flooding from rainwater, and a floodgate beneath the stopbank can be opened to allow this ‘ponding’ to drain off into the river.
When there is no stopbank, as shown in the second diagram, there will be nothing to stop the river from flooding. In this case, the solution is to put buildings on stilts. The height of the stilts is measured so that the floor of the house is 300mm above the 100-year flood level. This measurement is called the ‘freeboard’.(184)
(184 words, band 9)
a类雅思小作文9分范文 流程图之屋顶太阳能发电
The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use.
该流程图展示家用太阳能电板如何工作。请作答。
小作文比较容易提高，那些基本的套路在很多资料里都可以找到，比如开头段怎么写之类的。
我前面总结的几点都是在备考过程中自己的一些体会，算是一些没有在辅导书中一下就学会的东西，其实总结下来就是如何归纳信息，并且言简意赅的表达出来。
剑桥雅思6test1大作文范文，剑桥雅思6test1大作文task2高分范文 真题答案实感。考试的时候一直是考官给我的，因为我觉得我应该是最棒的。但我自认为我是个非常棒的中国人，我自认为是非常有发挥的一个部分，我的大部分分数也就是。首先，我要说的是，我想说，这是一个雅思写作考试。这里我想说一下，如果想得到8分以上，一定要有好的结构。首先，我们来说说雅思写作。雅思写作考试分为两个部分：一部分是图表分析，一部分是图表分析。我们在写作文的时候，一定要注意图片分析。这也是我们在备考的时候一定要注意的。首先，要明白雅思写作评分的标准：图表的准确性是非常重要的。所以我们应该在考试时，把图表分别描述一下。
由于大作文备考体系内容超载，目前以独立的链接发布。▲ 建议大家认真学习完本篇小作文的系统攻略后，再跳转到以下链接 ↓ ↓ ↓
---------前方海量干货预警！！！---------
时常发现各位烤鸭们的备考资料实在太多，尤其是小作文，各种表格、各种范文，可是很多时候，看得越多，越是一脸懵逼，因为资料太多太乱了，而不会分类归纳和总结。
小作文需要的准备、资料、模板其实不在于多，而在于精，关键是对写作思路有清晰了解，也就是在什么地方应该写什么内容，以及对核心写作语言的融会贯通。
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The map shows the growth of a village called Chorleywood between 1868 and 1994.
It is clear that the village grew as the transport infrastructure was improved. Four periods of development are shown on the map, and each of the populated areas is near to the main roads, the railway or the motorway.
From 1868 to 1883, Chorleywood covered a small area next to one of the main roads. Chorleywood Park and Golf Course is now located next to this original village area. The village grew along the main road to the south between 1883 and 1922, and in 1909 a railway line was built crossing this area from west to east. Chorleywood station is in this part of the village.
The expansion of Chorleywood continued to the east and west alongside the railway line until 1970. At that time, a motorway was built to the east of the village, and from 1970 to 1994, further development of the village took place around motorway intersections with the railway and one of the main roads.
Some people say that older people should live with their adult children. Others say that they shouldn't. Which do you think is good practice.
One of the topics in daily life is whether or not the older people should live with their adult children. My answer is the question is that it is better for them not to.
Firstly, people of different ages have different ways of life. The old people like a quiet, peaceful and regular life whereas the young prefer noises, activities and unrestrained enjoyment. If they live together, old may feel that they are always disturbed and the young may feel that they are often handicapped.
Secondly, people of different generations have different views and values. What is quite normal to the parents may seem to be old-fashioned or wrong to the children. When they live together, they may disagree on matters ranging from minor domestic matters to national and international issues. Consequently, family life may be unpleasant or even unbearable to both the old and the young.
Last but not the least, adult children, like their parents, love independence and freedom, but their parents still take them as children and unintentionally interfere in their affairs. The situation will be worse if the adult children are already married. In this case, the children have already built a new and closed world and any outside interference may lead to conflicts.
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that if the parents and their adult children do not live together, both the old and the young can enjoy complete independence and freedom, live a life they like, and keep intact their affections for each other.
I am writing to seek accommodation in the Snowy Mountains for agroup of students from Perth.
We expect to be the Snowy Mountains between June 1 and June 12. There are fourteen people in our group, five men and seven women, and a married couple. The five men will accept dormitory accommodation,and the women are happy to share rooms, but the married couple would like a double room. We hope to keep our expenses as low as possible.
Please tellme about recreational services in the area. The group will bring their own boots for bushwalking, but we are hoping to hire equipment for other sports, likes kiing. Some of our group will want to hire geological picks and other equipment, if possible. We also need to know about access to caves and other interesting geological features in the area.
I am looking forward toreceiving information about the Student Hostel Services and other facilities.
作文为饼状图，图表主题和四个主要要素都已经给出中文提示，同学们在一段根据图表信息进行描述即可，主要不要拼错单词。中间段可以探索图表现象的出现原因，从经济社会和科技发展的角度进行拓展，可以适当应用自己准备的经典句型，要注意各个论点之间的逻辑连接。最后尾段的书写可以展望外来趋势或者总结概括图表内容。
以上为2020考研英二大作文的解析，希望对同学们有所帮助，祝各位同学成功上 岸，金榜题名。
题目：When designing a building, the most important factor is inside use of the building rather than its outside appearance. Do you agree or disagree?
Which is more important, function or appearance? This has always been a hot topic for so many years.
As people are becoming more and more practical, they pay great emphasis on functions of things. But when people are satisfied with material life, they have spiritual requirement. And aesthetics is one of their pursuits.
The basic requirement of a building is its inside use. No one buys a house that he cannot live in only to appreciate its appearance.
As I have said, modern people are practical, so we never do things that cannot benefit us. But with the new techniques and advanced tools, up until now, human beings have no problem to construct a building to satisfy our practical use, thus in this sense, on the basis of usefulness, we have a higher requirement of beautifulness.
That’s why our world has become more and more beautiful.
But it also depends on different cases. Buildings used for exhibition should not be the same with those used for residence. Great buildings for exhibitions or used as museums are art works themselves and worthy of our appreciating.
The most famous is Sydney Theatre. Many people visit it for its great beauty rather than enjoying concerts.
If the building is only for us to live in, then there is no necessity to invite a famous architect do design such an elegant house. Such buildings are also out of our purchasing power.
To sum up, the inside use and the appearance are both very important. But it doesn’t mean that we should always give the same weight to the two. It should depend on concrete occasions.
The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The line graph compares the percentage of people aged 65 or more in three countries over a period of 100 years.
It is clear that the proportion of elderly people increases in each country between 1940 and 2040. Japan is expected to see the most dramatic changes in its elderly population.
In 1940, around 9% of Americans were aged 65 or over, compared to about 7% of Swedish people and 5% of Japanese people. The proportions of elderly people in the USA and Sweden rose gradually over the next 50 years, reaching just under 15% in 1990. By contrast, the figures for Japan remained below 5% until the early 2000s.
Looking into the future, a sudden increase in the percentage of elderly people is predicted for Japan, with a jump of over 15% in just 10 years from 2030 to 2040. By 2040, it is thought that around 27% of the Japanese population will be 65 years old or more, while the figures for Sweden and the USA will be slightly lower, at about 25% and 23% respectively.(178 words, band 9)
The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.
The line graph compares three companies in terms of their waste output between the years 2000 and 2015.
In 2000, company A produced 12 tonnes of waste, while companies B and C produced around 8 tonnes and 4 tonnes of waste material respectively. Over the following 5 years, the waste output of companies B and C rose by around 2 tonnes, but the figure for company A fell by approximately 1 tonne.
雅思图表作文真题：混合图：温度与降水
The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata.
The chart compares average figures for temperature and precipitation over the course of a calendar year in Kolkata.
It is noticeable that monthly figures for precipitation in Kolkata vary considerably, whereas monthly temperatures remain relatively stable. Rainfall is highest from July to August, while temperatures are highest in April and May.
Between the months of January and May, average temperatures in Kolkata rise from their lowest point at around 20°C to a peak of just over 30°C. Average rainfall in the city also rises over the same period, from approximately 20mm of rain in January to 100mm in May.
While temperatures stay roughly the same for the next four months, the amount of rainfall more than doubles between May and June. Figures for precipitation remain above 250mm from June to September, peaking at around 330mm in July. The final three months of the year see a dramatic fall in precipitation, to a low of about 10mm in December, and a steady drop in temperatures back to the January average.(173 words, band 9)
雅思图表作文的写作技巧
一、雅思表格图图表作文的写作要点
1横向比较。介绍横向各个数据的区别，变化和趋势
2不需要将每一个数据分别说明，突出强调数据最大值和最小值
3最对比时要总结出数据对比最悬殊的和最小的
二、雅思曲线图图表作文的写作要点
1极点说明。即，对图表当中最高的，最低的点要单独进行说明
2趋势说明。即，对图表当中曲线的连续变化进行说明，如上升，下降，波动，持平
3交点说明。即，对图表当中多根曲线的交点进行对比说明
三、雅思饼状图图表雅思作文的写作要点
1介绍各扇面及总体的关系
2各个扇面之间的比较，同类扇面在不同时间，不同地点的比较
3重点突出特点最明显的扇面：最大的`，最小的，互相成倍的
四、雅思综合图图表作文的写作要点
1不求甚解，不拘泥于细节
2分门别类，分段落详细介绍各个图表
3不画蛇添足，主观臆断或猜测图表之间的关系
The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown at least 150 Words.
图表展示的是成人继续接受教育培训的理由，以及它的费用该由谁来承担的调查统计。请为大学讲座写一篇150字以上的报告。
雅思图表小作文混合图(线图+饼图)9分范文：
The summary of a survey on adult education is presented in the 2 charts. The bar chart summarizes the factors that caused adults to continue their education, while the pie chart shows the public opinion regarding the funding of adult education.(简要概括导入)
According to the bar chart, 40% of the respondents mentioned “interest in the subject” as the reason they decided to go back to school. This factor was followed closely by the aim to gain qualification at 38%. On the other hand, only 9% of the survey participants said that they went to school in order to meet more people. This is the least popular reason among the 7 given.(细节段1，分析图表1)
Among all the people surveyed regarding the funding, 40% of them felt that this adult education should be the responsibility of the individual. Although 35% of them thought that the employers should lend the helping hand, only 25% agreed that the taxpayers should share the burden.(细节段2，分析图表2)
In summary, the survey showed a mixed opinion regarding the reasons and the funding for adults education.(简要总结)
附雅思小作文simon考官推荐套路
For the task 1 report, I aim for 9 sentences.这是他所擅长的图表作文4段9句大法，具体结构如下：
: 1 sentence，Introduction段落，1句话介绍图表大意足矣
(summary): 2 sentences，Overview段，用2句话做图表信息的摘要
'details' paragraph: 3 sentences
'details' paragraph: 3 sentences。
三、四段为细节段，每段3句做详细的特征或规律的描述。
当然，Simon同学不忘补充，这只是他个人在写作时的偏好结构，好文无定法，大家也不需要拘泥于9句，只要内容表达的需要，8句，10句都是没问题的。
注意：simon考官主张雅思小作文无须总结!大家可留心这一点。当然小作文是否需要写总结段，雅思届尚无定论。
最新9分雅思图表写作范文之混合图 英国移民变化
The chart below shows long-term international migration in UK..Write at least 150 Words.
图表展示-的间英国移民数量的变化情况。请写一篇150字以上的报告。
The chart gives information about UK immigration, emigration and net migration between 1999 and .(1句做介绍导入)
Both immigration and emigration rates rose over the period shown, but the figures for immigration were significantly higher. Net migration peaked in and .(2句做图表概述)
In 1999, over 450,000 people came to live in the UK, while the number of people who emigrated stood at just under 300,000. The figure for net migration was around 160,000, and it remained at a similar level until . From 1999 to 2004, the immigration rate rose by nearly 150,000 people, but there was a much smaller rise in emigration. Net migration peaked at almost 250,000 people in 2004.(3句的细节段1)
After 2004, the rate of immigration remained high, but the number of people emigrating fluctuated. Emigration fell suddenly in 2007, before peaking at about 420,000 people in 2008. As a result, the net migration figure rose to around 240,000 in 2007, but fell back to around 160,000 in 2008.(3句的细节段2)(159)
PS：simon考官主张雅思小作文无须总结!大家可留心这一点。当然小作文是否需要写总结段，雅思届尚无定论。
雅思图表小作文混合图范文分享 世界用水
雅思图表小作文混合图(线图+表格)9分范文：
The charts compare the amount of water used for agriculture, industry and homes around the world, and water use in Brazil and the Democratic Republic of Congo.
It is clear that global water needs rose significantly between 1900 and , and that agriculture accounted for the largest proportion of water used. We can also see that water consumption was considerably higher in Brazil than in the Congo.
In 1900, around 500km? of water was used by the agriculture sector worldwide. The figures for industrial and domestic water consumption stood at around one fifth of that amount. By 2000, global water use for agriculture had increased to around 3000km?, industrial water use had risen to just under half that amount, and domestic consumption had reached approximately 500km?.
In the year 2000, the populations of Brazil and the Congo were 176 million and million respectively. Water consumption per person in Brazil, at 359m?, was much higher than that in the Congo, at only 8m?, and this could be explained by the fact that Brazil had 265 times more irrigated land.(184 words, band 9)
必备雅思写作连接词分享 起承转合一气呵成
雅思写作连接词之起：
First/firstly/first of all/ to begin with/to start with/ in the first place,
First and foremost;For one thing(… for another);On the one hand(…on the other)
雅思写作连接词之承：
Second/secondly;Third/thirdly;Besides/in addition/ in addition to…;Furthermore/what is more/moreover;Namely/ in other words;In the same way/similarly/likewise;Afterwards/ after that/ after a while;Consequently/as a consequence/as a result
雅思写作连接词之转：
But/yet;However/Nonetheless/Nevertheless;On the contrary/conversely;Though/although/even though/even if;Unlike…. ,A…;Different from… , A….;In fact/ as a matter of fact,
雅思写作连接词之合：
Finally/eventually/in the final analysis;In conclusion/to conclude;In short/In brief;In summary/ to sum up/in sum;As I have said/as has been noted;Given the fact that…., we can come to the conclusion that…
另附雅思大作文考官范文示例
In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
构思过程：
独居，也就是一个人生活，显然有利有弊，如果选择一边倒观点显然都站不住脚，很难论证，需要分开讨论平均用力。主体段一段写好处，一段写坏处。抽象类话题往往在寻找观点上比较困难或者没有方向，建议大家按照文波雅思教授的方法分类提取观点。本篇考官分别从个人和经济的角度出发，层次分明论证清晰，值得大家学习。
1)背景导入，说尤其在发达国家的大城市，最近几年独居变得更为常见。
In recent years it has become far more normal for people to live alone,particularly in large cities in the developed world.
(句型结构：It adj. for sb. to do sth. 后置状语补充，注意完成时has become;注意particularly的用法，举特例方便直接，类似especially但语气更强; in the developed world比in developed countries更地道;far more修饰normal代入感强)
2)观点句，我认为这个趋势的影响好坏各半。
In my opinion, this trend could have both positive and negative consequences in equal measure.
(句型结构：简单句 后置状语;虚拟语气could have;consequences高分词;in equal measure高分搭配)
Main Paragraphs 1
1)段首概括，一个人住在个人和宏观经济上都有好处。
The rise in one-person households can be seen as positive for both personal and broader economic reasons.
(句型结构：被动 后置状语并列;主语the rise in one-person households替换more people choose to live alone，地道高分搭配准确;seen as语法得分点;personal & broader economic词汇得分点)
2)分论点1：个人层面上，独居的人可能变得比和家人一起住的人更独立自强(常见观点)
On an individual level, people who choose to live alone may become more independent and self-reliant than those who live with family members.
(句型结构：前置状语 主语who从句 谓语比较级 宾语who从句，高分复合句;self-reliant高分词，展示词汇量)
3)举例论证 线性推理展开：独居年轻人需要学做饭，做家务，付账单，管账等重要的生活技能;这样的人增加了就是种正面的发展
A young adult who lives alone, for example, will need to learn to cook, clean, pay bills and manage his or her budget, all of which are valuable life skills; an increase in the number of such individuals can certainly be seen as a positive development.
(句型结构：主语从句 插入语 不定式并列 宾语all of which从句;简单分句 被动;valuable得分词;an increase语法得分点;such individuals指代准确，语法和词汇得分点)
4)分论点2：经济角度上看，独居的趋势会导致住房需求增加(加分观点)
From an economic perspective, the trend towards living alone will result ingreater demand for housing.
(句型结构：前置状语 后置定语 简单句;trend towards living搭配准确，词汇和语法得分点;result in学术搭配，词汇得分点;demand for housing词汇得分点)
5) 举例说明展开：这样会让建筑公司，房产中介和其它依赖业主购买产品的公司获益。
This is likely to benefit the construction industry, estate agents and a whole host of other companies that rely on homeowners to buy their products or services.
(句型结构：简单句 宾语并列 宾语that从句;likely to benefit学术搭配，词汇得分点;construction industry & estate agents展示词汇量;rely on homeowners词汇得分点)
Main Paragraph 2
1)段首概括：上述个人和经济的论点可以反向考虑;(简介易懂，挂钩前文暗含对比，CC满分技巧)
However, the personal and economic arguments given above can be considered from the opposite angle.
(句型结构：转折 简单句被动;given above非谓语修饰，语法得分点;be considered from学术搭配，词汇语法得分点;the opposite angle词汇得分点)
2)分论点1：和独立的好处相比，独居的人会感觉孤独、隔离和不安(常见观点)
Firstly, rather than the positive feeling of increased independence, people who live alone may experience feelings of loneliness, isolation and worry.
(句型结构：前置状语 主语从句 宾语并列;rather than无痕迹对比，语法和CC得分点;loneliness & isolation高分词)
3)举例对比 论证展开：他们错过了家人或室友提供的对话和支持，还要承担过重的家庭账单和职责;这样来说，这个趋势就是负面的
They miss out on the emotional support and daily conversation that family or flatmates can provide, and they must bear the weight of all household bills and responsibilities; in this sense, perhaps the trend towards living alone is a negative one.
(句型结构：简单句并列 宾语从句 简单分句;miss out on地道搭配;emotional support, daily conversation & flatmates词汇加分点;bear the weight of高分搭配，词汇得分点;a negative one指代准确避免重复，语法得分点)
4)分论点2：从经济角度来说，住房需求增加会推高房价和租金(加分观点)
Secondly, from the financial point of view, a rise in demand for housing is likely to push up property prices and rents.
(句式结构:前置状语 简单句;the financial point of view替换an economic perspective;likely to push up学术搭配;property prices & rents词汇得分点)
5)对比论证 说明展开：虽然让企业获益，但大众包括独居的人都要面临更高的居住成本
While this may benefit some businesses, the general population, including those who live alone, will be faced with rising living costs.
(句式结构：让步句 插入语补充 被动;be faced with地道搭配;rising living costs词汇得分点)
Conclusion
1)一句话总结：独居增加对个人和经济影响有好有坏
In conclusion, the increase in one-person households will have both beneficial and detrimental effects on individuals and on the economy.
(句式结构：总结 简单句 宾补;detrimental不利的，高分词，beneficial & detrimental替换positive & negative;两个on介词短语并列，语法得分点)
雅思大作文评分
TR: 两面观点完整回答问题，分论点详实有深度，首尾段观点总结到位，9分
CC: 全篇结构清晰，整齐，行文连接通顺，易于理解，没有明显模板痕迹，9分
LR: 词汇非常多样，同义替换到位，搭配地道准确，9分
GA: 句型多变，复合句实用灵活，没有语法错误，9分
(13 sentences, 306 words, band 9)
考官经典的雅思大作文4段13句模板，大家可以模仿哦，注意，这里所谓的模板，是指他所熟悉和擅长的一种行文结构，而并非具体的模板句型。
Today the way we consider human psychology and mental development is heavily influenced by the genetic sciences. We now understand the importance ofinherited characteristics more than ever before. Yet we are still unable to decide whether an individual's personality and development are more influenced by genetic factors (nature) or by the environment (nurture).
Research, relating to identical twins, has highlighted how significant inherited characteristics can be for an individual's life. But whether these characteristics are able to develop within the personality of an individual surely depends on whether the circumstances allow such a development. it seems that the experiences we have in life are so unpredictable and so powerful, that they can boost or over-ride other influences, and there seems to be plenty of research findings to confirm this.
My own view is that there is no one major influence in a person's life. Instead, the traits, we inherit from our parents and the situations and experiences we have in life are constantly interacting. It is the interacting of the two that shapes a person's personality and dictates how that personality develops. If this were not true, then we would be able to predict the behaviour and character of a person from the moment they were born.
In conclusion, I do not think that either nature or nurture is the major influence on a person, but that both have powerful effects. How these factors interact is still unknown today and they remain largely unpredictable in a person's life.
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