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第一段：阐述意义
第二段：具体分析
第三段：总结号召
There is a simple but enlightening saying—“What is worth doing is worth doing well.” Then, what is worth doing? My answer is the thing you love, taking responsibility and cultivating a habit of lifetime learning.
To begin with, doing what one loves to do may arouse their passion for striving, bring them motivation to move forward and help them grow up. Thus, if one intends to acquire and enjoy long-time happiness, it is advisable for them to do what they love and do it well.
In addition, it is of great necessity for us, as young people, to be responsible in life, work, and study. Doing our best to take responsibility, with no doubt, will foster our concrete skills, ensure more fruitful results, and enable us to go further on the way to success.
Meanwhile, numerous celebrities’ life stories have persuaded us that the habit of lifelong learning is an engine which drives both our study and future career. Living in an era of fierce competition, every young person should be educated to gain new skills and knowledge to adapt to the speedy social development. If one rests, they will rust.
As a matter of fact, there are so many other things that are worth doing well, and only by doing well what is worth doing, you can make a promising and hopeful future. (225words)
参考译文
有一句简单但有启发性的话语：值得做的事情都值得做好。那么，什么是值得做的事情呢？我的答案是：你所爱的事情、承担责任和培养终身学习的习惯。
首先，做自己喜欢的事情可以唤起其奋斗的热情，带来前进的动力并帮助成长。因此，如果一个人想要得到并享受长久的幸福，做自己喜爱的事并做好就是明智之举。
此外，作为年轻人的我们很有必要在生活、工作和学习中做有责任感的人。毫无疑问，尽全力承担责任将会培养我们扎实的技能、确保产出丰富的成果并使得我们在成功的道路上走的更远。
同时，无数名人的人生故事告诉我们，终生学习的习惯就是我们学习和职业生涯的动力引擎。生活在这个竞争激烈的时代，每个年轻人都应该被教育去获取新技能和新知识来适应社会的飞速发展。如果一个人停下前进的脚步，他也就“锈”掉了。
事实上，还有很多其他值得我们做好的事情，而且只有把值得做好的事情做好，我们才会创造一个充满希望和光明的未来。
第一段：引用名言+功能句引出主题
第二段：意义排比+现象+举例
第三段：现象+倒装句
This is a simple but enlightening saying — “What is worth doing is worth doing well. ” The profound meaning in this remark persuades us that trying our utmost in doing what is worth doing will be the engine which drives both our study and future career.
Doing well what is worth doing, without any doubt, will foster our concrete skills, ensure more fruitful results for tomorrow, and enable us to go further on the way to success. As a matter of fact, it lays a solid foundation for our achievement tomorrow. However, in the contemporary, society, a host of youngsters fail to finish assignments which they should have done, let alone doing the best in worthy things. This is a common phenomenon. A typical example is my friend Daniel, who is lazy and always postpones what he should do until tomorrow. Thus, such a habit leads him nowhere.
Living in an era of fierce competition, every youngster should be educated to foster their habit and awareness of doing things well, especially those worth doing. Only in this way can the young make the best preparation for tomorrow.（189字）
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the quote, “Beauty of the soul is the essential beauty.” You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
破题思路：灵魂之美的重要性和意义/为什么是本质的美
婕婕版课堂范文：
This is a simple but enlightening saying—“Beauty of the soul is the essential beauty.” The profound meaning in this remark persuades us that one's inner beauty is the real key to the treasure of life and friendship.
To begin with, just as the old saying goes, don’t judge a book by its cover. Provided that young people intend to acquire and enjoy long-time friendship, it is not advisable for us to focus on others’ appearances, skin colors, or clothing. Even if some people possess stunning appearances, without inner beauty, they are still prone to confine themselves with poor abilities and narrow-mindedness. Furthermore, inner beauty, without a doubt, is the steppingstone which can enrich our mind, ensure more fruitful results in friendship, and enable to us to go further on the way of a rewarding life. A typical example is my friend Daniel, who not only has a handsome face, but also acquires a kind heart, thus making him the most popular teacher in Kaochong. As a matter of fact, intelligent people in large numbers have realized the significance of inner beauty.
Consequently, we young people should bear in mind that if our life is like a skyscraper, the beauty of the soul makes the building taller and firmer. Only with a beautiful soul can we the young gain lifelong benefits. (235 words)
这是一句简单却富有启发性的话——“灵魂之美是本质之美。”这句话的深刻含义使我们相信，一个人的内在美是生命和友谊宝藏的真正钥匙。
首先，正如古语所说，不要以貌取人。如果年轻人想要获得并享受长期的友谊，我们不应该关注他人的外表、肤色或服装。即使有些人拥有令人惊艳的外表，但若是没有内在美，他们仍然会受限于不足的能力和狭窄的心胸。此外，内在美毫无疑问可以丰富我们的思想，同时也是确保友谊取得更多成果，并使我们在有意义的生活道路上走得更远的踏脚石。一个典型的例子是我的朋友丹尼尔，他不仅有一张英俊的脸，而且有一颗善良的心，从而使他成为考虫最受欢迎的老师。事实上，大量聪明人已经意识到内在美的意义。
因此，我们年轻人应该记住，如果我们的生活像一座摩天大楼，美丽的心灵会使大楼更高、更坚固。只有拥有美丽的心灵，我们年轻人才能获得终生的裨益。
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